Scene 2 The bedroom
Mother: Oh, that feels so good. It's so good!
Cuts to shot of Cardboard Box with hat on.
Mother: Oh, fuck me Bad boy.
Enter Henry.
Henry: I couldn't sleep.
Mother: You're 17.
Henry: I wanted to interrupt your sex.
Mother: Well I hope you're happy becau-
Bump sound is heard from somewhere else in the house.
Mother: What was that?
Man with gun runs in.
Man: Come with me!
Mother: No.
Shot of the box.
Man: You've seen through my lie? I have no choice but to end it all.
Man takes his own life. He is later seen in the next shot running away.
Shot of the box.
Mother: Oh, George, I love you.
She hugs the box.
Right, I think that's the end of that awkward writing experience.
Was it good for you?
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